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Tamla T 54123 (A), September 1965
b/w Since You Won My Heart
(Written by Pete Moore, Smokey Robinson, Marv Tarplin and Ronnie White)
Tamla Motown TMG 540 (A), November 1965
b/w Since You Won My Heart
(Released in the UK under license through EMI/Tamla Motown)
Over and over again on this blog – and especially here in 1965 – I’ve been congratulating Smokey Robinson, the most overworked man at Motown, for consistently coming up with the goods. As the company’s go-to writer, producer, A&R man and overall mentor for every struggling act on the books (not to mention the lead singer, songwriter and producer of one of the label’s most successful groups), Smokey was the guy Motown called whenever they needed help with something, and it’s to his great credit that he seems to have been willing to do it properly. No matter how busy he might be, Robinson seems to have made the time, putting aside whatever he was actually doing in order to devote himself to the task at hand. On Motown Junkies, I’ve applauded him many times now for resisting the (surely very strong!) temptation to simply phone it in: whether Motown needed a record to break a new act, a record to continue a hit streak, a record to get a big name back on track, or even just some filler, time and again Robinson came up with something good, or at least something interesting.
It’s a bit of a shock, then, to meet My Girl Has Gone, a Miracles single which I’ll freely admit I never knew about. Here, right in the middle of Robinson’s golden run of songs in ’65, both for himself and for other people, here’s one that passed me by altogether; I’d heard this in the context of the Miracles’ magnificent sixth studio LP, Going To A Go-Go, but even though it’s written on the front cover in huge type (first in the list, in fact!)… if you’d put a gun to my head and forced me to pick out which songs from the album were singles, I’d never have correctly guessed this one.
There’s a reason it made so little impression (as a potential single) on me, too – it’s very pretty and it’s beautifully sung, but if you were to build a musical songwriting computer and feed it the phrase “Smokey by numbers”, the result would surely sound a lot like My Girl Has Gone.
Once again, I’m going to be outnumbered here, I know, but when you look at what Smokey and the Miracles have already given us in 1965 – and they weren’t even finished making masterpieces this year, minor and major – well, for me, this one just isn’t in the same league. There are strong echoes of the anthemic The Tracks Of My Tears, there are obvious influences from the gorgeous heartbreak of Ooo Baby Baby and A Fork In The Road, there are a lot of the building blocks we’ll later see deployed to splendid effect in Choosey Beggar, but somehow it just ends up not being as good as any of those.
I know I’ll come across as ungrateful or nitpicking here – this is still a nice pop record, it’s great to hear the Miracles in flight in their prime like this, and I’m aware I sound like someone who’s been given a free gourmet meal at a five star restaurant and then complains because the cheese board is out of Brie. So, I suppose once again it’s a case of me holding Smokey to an unfairly high standard – having seen what he can do when he puts his mind to it, perhaps I’m just more sensitive to when he’s not bringing his “A” game. But bringing it he most surely is not.
I think the main problem I’ve got with it, as so often happens here on Motown Junkies, is lyrical; the chorus starts out as another crowd-pleasing chant full of catchy moments and phrases, very reminiscent of The Tracks Of My Tears, as Smokey wails “My girl has gone, and said goodbye” – and he’s committed to it, bringing the same audible tears and heartache he brings to his best vocals. But the rest of the song is a mish-mash of tropes and slogans, and the overall feeling I get from it is that Smokey (or one of the other Miracles who cop songwriting credits here) came up with the title or the melody first and then clumsily cobbled together a song around it.
I’ll be honest again, I don’t understand what this song is really meant to be. The title and the verses have Smokey bemoaning his romantic fate in the wake of an ostensibly traumatic breakup, but instead of the wonderful personal vignettes we heard in I Gotta Dance To Keep From Crying or A Love She Can Count On or All That’s Good or I’ll Try Something New, where – both through the words (not always Smokey’s) and the way he sang them (most definitely always Smokey’s) – Robinson’s narrators conjured up images of those relationships so real that you felt you knew these people intimately after just three minutes, there’s none of that here. The rhymes are obvious and leaden (“When you were mine, I loved you so much / I got a thrill from your every touch”… really, Smokey? Really?), the phrasing is messy, and the specifics are missing altogether. He’s singing about a generic stand-in, a sand sculpture at the centre of the song, and his airy, non-specific lament lacks gravity as a result.
Even stranger, a lot of the song is taken up with generic second-person advice; it’s a device Smokey has used in the past on songs like the excellent Everybody’s Gotta Pay Some Dues and the rather less excellent Such Is Love, Such Is Life and You Can’t Let The Boy Overpower The Man In You, but here the advice comes in the form of banal platitudes (“don’t you cry, hold your head up high! / Don’t give up, give love one more try!” – and surely I can’t be the only person in the world who can’t listen to that part and expect Smokey and the Miracles to break into the great call-and-response “I need you!” bit from The Tracks Of My Tears?). Faced with trying to decide whether to make this a breakup song or an advice song, the Miracles opt for an uneasy compromise, via the clunky method of having Smokey sing consoling advice to himself (“now all I can say to comfort myself, is…”), a device which just never quite works. If anything, it makes the narrator sound even less sympathetic; maybe it’s meant to be an ultra-realistic portrait of a guy who’s so broken-hearted that he’s annoying his friends by laying it on thick and basking in the resulting attention, but I’m more inclined to think there were conceptual problems with this song from day one and they just couldn’t be satisfyingly fixed. I know (now) that this song is much loved by many Miracles fans – as always, I’m very willing to hear why, because for the moment it just doesn’t do it for me.
For all of that, it’s not bad, I’d like to emphatically underline that point – it fits perfectly with the rest of the Going To A Go-Go album, beautifully sung and recorded and arranged, and like I said earlier I’ll never turn down the chance to hear the golden-era Miracles doing what they do best. It’s just that after all the riches they’ve given us recently, and with all the riches they’re going to be giving us just around the corner, this feels like a stopgap, and therefore something of a let-down.
MOTOWN JUNKIES VERDICT
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Henry said:
Hmmm….I hear what you are saying Mr. Nixon, but right off the bat, 5 is too much. I agree that if you stack this song against Ooh Baby Baby, Tracks Of My Tears, even Choosey Beggar, admittedly, it is going to come up short. Ooh Baby Baby, Tracks of My Tears, will make anyone’s top 500 song list. including, Show Tunes, Jazz, Gospel, Classical, World, …..etc. To say nothing of Going To A Go Go, and that’s just what is on this album. My take is that this was done quickly, and the best part of the song is the middle section, with the group harmonies, and the music arrangement. I as an unabashed William Robinson the writer fan, know that I would be reaching if I said that Smokey and the guys were going for a more pedestrian song, after the sonic brilliance of Tracks of My Tears. Sadly, I cannot even type that with any conviction, it is so lame. So I will end with another reach. This was a concept album, and this song ties in with the theme/feeling of the album. Sorry, that doesn’t work either. Though this is the best Miracles album, from end to end. Because it is Smokey, I have to give the song at least a 6. Until now I thought I liked it more than I do now.
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The Nixon Administration said:
Yup, I’d agree with all of that. And I do love the idea of making something conspicuously mortal on purpose! (I’ll be delving into this sort of territory a bit later on in the Motown story; no spoilers, but stay tuned 🙂 ).
Honestly, I had no idea this was ever a single – as with the Supremes’ More Hits (and note the album title as listed on this 7″ label!!!), it’s one of those “all killer no filler” albums that doesn’t actually work all that well when you come to parcel out individual bits of it.
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mndean said:
I was going to come up with a stirring defense for this song. But since it’s been some time since I last heard it, I went back for a listen. Oh. I was thinking of a different Smokey Robinson song (I really think I mixed this up with Choosey Beggar). This has that “stringing rhymes together, aren’t I so clever?” effect on me similar to other lesser Smokey. It’s pleasant enough so no quibble from me on the points.
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MichaelS said:
I might wind up in the minority on this one! I like it as much as, if not better than, its predecessor. The bridge is especially strong for me. Maybe it’s the use of dissonant notes which gives it a foreboding feeling. Interestingly, both songs performed about the same on Billboard’s Hot 100: “Tracks” peaked at #16 (12 weeks on the chart) and “My Girl…,” #14 (10 weeks). For me, they’re both “9’s.”
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John Plant said:
Well, Nixon, you warned me! – This song has only gotten stronger for me over the past 47 years – its simplicity is the source of its sublimity, like Schubert. It doesn’t need to be any subtler or more sophisticated than it is. I think perhaps you’ve missed the gospel echoes in Smokey’s attempts to put some heart into himself – and any of the rest of us who might be in the same boat. The powerful accents at the beginning of each line – ‘DON’T give up, give it one more try..’ Perhaps the difference between us is that I find myself believing in the emotional truth and power of every word he says. I particularly love the interjections between each line of the chorus as the song draws toward a close: ‘When I start to cry I say….’ culminating in that glorious, victorious ‘Hoo-ee!’ – A 10 for me, now and always. Here’s a sample of Schubert being deceptively simple: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5hPdIhTrd4
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John Plant said:
Another thing that makes this song more than ‘Smokey-by-numbers’ is the positive way it deals with a painful experience – not the usual helpless wallow in self-pity, however lovely. I realize that the song also has a bit of a work-shanty feel about it – something like ‘Haul away, Joe’ – in those strong accents, and yes, in the simplicity of the rhymes ‘DON’T give up… THERE’S a right girl….’
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Rhine Ruder said:
you’ve been very stingy with the miracles … so this this unusually low mark comes with disapointment, but little surprise …
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The Nixon Administration said:
That ledger will be more than balanced out in due course, don’t worry…
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Robb Klein said:
I’d have given this a “7”. It’s not outstanding for The Miracles’ very high standards. But that’s no reason to punish this extremely good song.
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The Nixon Administration said:
I was prepared for this, for once 🙂
As I said in the review, and as others have noted, it’s lyrically messy and musically it sounds almost the same as Choosey Beggar. It’s not being arbitrarily ‘punished’, though clearly I have a lower tolerance for the lazier moments of the mid-Sixties Miracles than I might if they’d not recorded a sheaf of my favourite Motown songs.
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Landini said:
Hi Robb! How are you? I trust you had a good summer. This is a bit off-topic, but I remember you saying you liked gospel music. If you get a chance, please look up these songs on You Tube :
“That’s The Kind Of God He Is” Inez Andrews
“This is the Year Of Jubiliee” Beverly Glenn
Both songs were recorded in the late 70s so the production is a little slick but the vocals are beautiful. I was feeling a little down in the dumps & the Beverly Glenn song really lifted up my spirits recently. I used to have both of these songs on vinyl albums. I managed to salvage the above 2 songs on an old cassette tape & then discovered they were on Youtube.
There is a loose Motown connection. Miss Glenn’s brother, Garry, recorded for Motown in the 80s.
Anyway, Shalom to you my friend!
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Landini said:
PS to Robb. I am not sure what you celebrate but a Most Blessed
Rosh Hashanah – September 4 – 6, 2013 & Fast of Gedaliah – September 8, 2013 to you my friend!
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Nick in Pasadena said:
I certainly was aware this had been released as a single, but it didn’t get much airplay here in Los Angeles. When I hear the title I always think of the infectious refrain of the title phrase, but then I realize that’s the ONLY thing that comes to mind when I think of it! I have to agree with your assessment of the song’s lyrical failings, and also agree that we do hold Smokey up to an impossibly high standard–a standard he helped create. But a “5” is a little severe. This is a “7” at least.
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treborij said:
I really like this record. Admittedly, it’s lyrically a little under par but it’s sung so beautifully by both Smokey and the Miracles. When it came out, I wasn’t the least bit disappointed, even though it was rather similar to Tracks. It was just different enough.
There’s a moment in this record that’s one of my all-time favorites in a Miracles record. It’s during the “happiness and all the rest” part. When he sings the line “I’m feeling sad and blue”, Marv Tarplin’s guitar dovetails with Smokey’s voice and it always gets me. (It’s not quite so obvious on the stereo mix incidentally). Because of this it would easily be a 7, maybe even an 8.
But for me, the this was a satisfying conclusion to the triumvirate of Ooh Baby Baby – Tracks Of My Tears – My Girl Has Gone.
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Mary Plant said:
Well said Treborj – that line gets me every time as well!
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Landini said:
Okay here comes a dissenting voice! I love this song. I actually like it just a shade more than “Tracks”. Don’t get me wrong, “Tracks” is an excellent song but for some strange reason I slightly prefer this one. If I ever had to make a list of my favorite Motown songs, I would have to make 2 lists. One would contain the “Classic Motown Songs” & the other would contain all of my quirky favorites.
I first heard this particular song on the Greatest Hits Vol2 album which I purchased in 1968. At that point, 10 year old me wasn’t aware of what songs had been the biggest hits or anything.
I really have a problem with the whole Big Chill Generation (BGC) re-discovery of Motown classics. Yes, it is great that people noticed Motown again in the early 80s, but unfortunately the BCG seemed to think that the Motown Sound was made up of about a dozen songs (& many times some non-Motown songs got thrown into the mix). “Tracks” is a song that suddenly got lots & lots of airplay – too much in my estimation.
It really irks me how the BCG suddenly co-opted the Motown Sound as “their music”. Most BCG people I knew back in the day didn’t like Motown! I remember my older brother’s friends coming over to our house & talking about the strange little brother (ME!) who liked soul/Motown music.
I have friends who never had one album by a black artist in their collection until Lionel Ritchie or Whitney Houston or maybe Michael Jackson! One friend jokingly asked me if I liked any white artists! I also know many people who prefer the 70’s remakes of Motown classics by James, Linda, etc over the originals! Argh! Don’t worry, I still love my friends!
Okay… where was I? Oh yeah we were discussing “My Girl Has Gone”. Strangely enough I really like the Bobby Taylor remake of this song from 1969. I remember buying the “Taylor Made Soul” album in college from a cut-out rack! I recently got the Bobby Taylor Collection CD so I have my song again!
To whomever is still reading my insane drivel…. Have a great day & to my US friends.. Happy Labor Day!
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John Plant said:
Glad to know that someone else is nuts about this song! – And I’d love to see your quirky list! – Mine would certainly include ‘In Case You Need Love’ from this album – and perhaps songs like ‘Little Miss Sweetness’ (Tempts or Isleys) and the Contours ‘The Old Miner.’ Maybe Smokey singing Kurt Weill (Speak Low, on the I’ll Try Something New album) as well…. Didn’t know about Bobby Taylor’s version of MGHG – I’ll go hunting. Happy Labor Day to you as well!
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Mark V said:
John, you’ll hear the gospel effects in Bobby’s version much more overtly. Someone, producer Richard Morris or Bobby himself, clearly latched onto the structure of uplift in the song.
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Landini said:
Oh yes! I was wondering what attracted me so much to Bobby Taylor’s version. You might have hit on the head there Mark V! There is a alot of Gospel=ish feel to Mr. Taylor’s music.
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Dave L said:
Tough one, and the five is a shock. But, you make a very good argument. “My Girl Has Gone,” has to sit under “Ooo Baby Baby,” “Tracks,” “Fork,” both Miracles sides yet to come December 6th, as well as “It’s Growing” and especially “Since I Lost My Baby” in regarding all of Smokey’s 1965 output. (That will include “Don’t Mess With Bill,” “My Baby” and “Don’t Look Back” too.)
This is a nice Miracles song, it is, but if a September 1965 Miracles 45 was needed, and they were ready, it’s hard to believe the sassy “In Case You Need Love” or the breezy “My Baby Changes Like The Weather” wouldn’t have made themselves more memorable. I like both of those much more, and they never made their way out of that album. It was like putting out a “Nothing But Heartaches” when you had two songs closer to a “Mother Dear.”
It’s never a powerhouse, but neither is it ever an annoyance like “Come On Do The Jerk,” and I don’t think you’re unfair to it. So no quarrels from me 🙂
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bogart4017 said:
I kinda liked it but i think it suffered following “Tracks” the way it did. It might have been released too soon. I also remember being shocked that it made top 15 and didnt make top ten. But then “Tracks” didnt make top ten either so…..
At any rate, it fits well in the album.
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Dave L said:
After 1965, the LP credit on the labels stop saying ‘taken from album’ and begin saying ‘in album’.
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John Plant said:
I just found this sentence in an article by Australian poet Clive James, which seems to encapsulate what’s great about Motown and Smokey in particular: ‘Complex simplicity means a phrase, a line, and sometimes a whole poem that makes a virtue out of incorporating its intellectual structure into its musical progression, and vice versa: it is always a two-way thing….’ I realize this is rather heavy artillery to bring out in defence of ‘Don’t give up, give it one more try/There’s a right girl for every guy’ – but it does articulate why I love this song so much, why I think ‘sublime’ is not too strong a word for it. It also confirms treborij’s superb observation about the way Tarplin’s guitar and Smokey’s voice come together at precisely the right moment.
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Damecia said:
First I must say the guitar and the drums kick ass. Second, Smokey & The Miracles have sooo much soul it’s hard not to crank this up. What Smokey lacks lyrically here is well made up with the emotion his vocals convey. For this reason I have to disagree with Steve D.’s 5/10 this should at least be a 7/10
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Topkat said:
For those who’ve never seen it, here are THE MIRACLES singing their 1965 Top 20 smash, “MY GIRL HAS GONE”
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Kevin Moore said:
The opening line makes me think of “When You Were Mine” by Prince, which for some reason I absolutely adore (especially the harmony of the chorus). That’s all I’ve got on this one.
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kevintimba said:
Anybody else hear a vocal pre-echo of Hendrix at 1:40?
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144man said:
“Two very good sides here from the perennial favourites The Miracles. Smokey has an irresistible way with a song, and this is a good follow up to Tracks Of My Tears, but of course it is hard to follow a number THAT good with something that is equally as striking, but nevertheless it is a worthwhile addition to The Miracles’ ever-growing repertoire of soulful numbers. 4/5
[Flip] 4/5”
[Dave Godin, Hitsville USA 10, 1965]
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